on þa worulde wrangr and yfel menn seon god
in the world wrong and evil men saw god
wyrc þu an ærc friþgifu rutland god cwæþ hine
make thou an ark Noah god said to him
to seofonum and mid his samodgesum habb þu æfre deora clæne and æfre deora unclæne
by sevens and with his companion have thou every beast clean and every beast unclean
þin sunu and eower wifmenn and þu sceall ingangan þa ærc
thy sons and their wives and thee shalt go into the ark
forþæm an flod-wæter ælc flæsc clæsian ic bringe geond eorþe
because a flood each flesh to destroy I bring throughout earth
ge fugelas ge deoras findas friþgifu and he gadriþ plantas
both fowls and beasts find Noah and he gathers plants
and hydende ælc hea hyll and ælc hea dune
and is hidden each high hill and each high dune
and ne on þa hærnflota and ge deoras ge menn sweltaþ
and not in the vessel both creatures and men die
þa fantas deop and firmamentum vindaugas god astynt
and the fountains deep and heaven’s windows god stopped
þa flod-wæter scranc and of þa ærc friþgifu ferde
the floodwater decreased and from the ark Noah went
and ingemynde wæs ge ierfes ge menn mid friþgifu
and remembered was both property and men with Noah
inlæd and geber friþgifu god cwaiþ hine
bring forth and multiply Noah God said to him
Old English Poem Modern Translation
God told Noah: make an ark.
Have seven of every clean animal and two of every unclean animal.
Go into the arc with your sons and with their wives,
because I am going to flood the earth to destroy the wicked.
All kinds of animals came to Noah, and he also gathered plants.
Every hill was covered,
and the animals and men that were not in the ark died.
God closed the deep fountains and the windows of heaven.
The waters receded and Noah left the ark.
Everything on the ark was preserved.
God told Noah to multiply and replenish the earth.
Old English Poem Features
Thematic Features:
My OE poem is a religious text about my distant relative Noah, and the flood.
Noah’s OE name is Friþgifu Rutland. [line 2]
Friþgifu means ‘peace-gift’. It is said that Noah was given his Hebrew name “rest or peace,” because he created farming tools that controlled the thorns of the earth. This act brought rest to men. The ‘Rut’ in the English
Lexical Features:
Latin loans
plantas – (Classical Latin) plants [line 6]
fantas – (Ecclesiastical Latin) baptismal founts [line 10]
firmamentum – (Classical Latin) heaven [line 10]
Norse loans
wrangr – awry, wayward [line 1]
vindaugas – windows (literally, wind-eyes) [line 10]
Old English
yfel (evil), menn (men), worulde (world), wyrc (make, construct), deor (beast), seofon (seven), claene (clean), sunus (sons), wifmen (wives), aerc (arc), flod (flood), flaesc (flesh), dun (hill, dune), hyll (hill), haernflota (vessel), waeter (water), deop (deep), etc.[through-out text]
Grammatical Features:
Inflectional affixes on nouns/adjectives
4 cases
Nominative: wrangr, yfel [line 1]
Accusative: hine [line 2]
Genetive: his [line 3]
Dative: sefonum, samodgesum [line 3]
3 grammatical genders
Masculine: fugelas, deoras (pl.) [line 6]
Feminine: worulde [line 1]
Neuter: flod [line 6]
2 numbers
Singular: ærc [line 2]
Plural: deoras [line 8]
Inflectional affixes on verbs
2 tenses
Present: habb [line 3]
Preterite: ferde [line 10]
3 persons
1: seon [line 1]
2: wyrc [line 2]
3: sweltaþ [line 8]
3 moods
Indicative: bringe [line 5]
Imperative: geber [line 12]
Subjunctive: sceall ingangan [line 4]
Syntactic Features:
My sentence orders: 1.) OVS, 2.) VSO, 3.) VSO, 4.) SVO, 5.) OSV,
6.) SVO, 7.) VS, 8.) SV, 9.) OSV, 10.) SV, 11.) VS, 12.) VS
I have 12 half-lines for a total of 6 lines.
Prosodic Features:
There is primary stress on at least four content words in every line.
Phonological Features:
Alliterations: w, s, f, h, f, i
1 comment:
I love that you chose to write about your "distant relative."
I think the line "God closed the deep fountains and the windows of heaven" is beautiful. Great imagery. It brings to mind the image of God pouring out blessings from heaven; but this time closing the window was the blessing. Interesting.
Thanks for including the features you used in your poem, I can tell you put a lot of effort into this assignment. Good job!
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